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Dec 16, 2005 23:02:03 GMT -5
Post by fireflame on Dec 16, 2005 23:02:03 GMT -5
Here is my poem: Eyes All eyes are different Some are cold and hard Others bright and heaven sent And few are lit and starred
They show joy Or laughter and sorrow too Some show that they are not a toy And others only blue
The art lies in seeing Both from the outside and within Seeing the best in everything And learning that good will always win
Not all of them show feeling Some try hard to try and hide To keep their hearts from tearing They fear of what's inside
Eyes that cry only to me Are eyes that shut to all But magic comes for few to see When they let down their wall
Look deep inside their eyes And find what's hiding there Friends, family, hearts and lies Are kept hidden there somewhere
A heart may not be perfect And friends drift away But it's life, so what do you expect? It's life, and it is here to stay
To find in her eyes some fear Or love and heartbreak true Just show that she is wise beyond their years And longs to talk with you
Eyes are full of wonder And not all may let you in So try to look deep under Their protective, colored skin i have to give u props that is very good
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Dec 16, 2005 23:24:58 GMT -5
Post by fireflame on Dec 16, 2005 23:24:58 GMT -5
i have a poem but it is not mine it is my friends and i dont have her approvel to put it on here but is has had hard time and she moved to a diffrent school cuz of her mom and her mom and dad made her feel this way so here it is.....it is also really sad i understand if u dont read it all
Dead
the hurt and pain wont seem to heal, my heart has woven into steel, i dont know if im possed by fear, releif wont seem to come by tear,
all my life i lived in a lie, in better pain i hide to die, broken and dead is my heart, the remaining me is one small parts,
in hopeful death lies all of me, i craddeled my hop, mat it be, releasing my life, my only dream, swallow alive ny shadow i scream,
i pray that this is a nightmare, one that left me empty to stare, as my life i had goes far away, trapped in shadow; dont want to stay,
it slowly sucks my soul away, as the years pass, what once was day, fear is what controls me now, the shadow eats me,escape; i dont know how,
in silence i sit, in a sin-filled hole, my body drained of my once free soul, lying dead, an empty slave as my bady rests within the grave, hiding both my body and soul, the shadows hope, is far too dull,
i hold my last, dying breath, waiting to welcome, my the fate, death, i had a chance, i had the light, but one mistake and it fades to night,
it whispers slowly in my head, urging me up, though i am dead, i cant feel anything; im numb, im blind, im deaf, and i am dumb,
its warmth cant reach m cold dead soul, my blood of sin; its far too full, i wish i could rest; but i bledd regret, i gambled my life, and lost the bet,
forgiveness is far too lost and dead, i lay forgotten; full of dread, releasing my last breath, i am completely scared,when my heart beats no more, lam truly dead
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Dec 20, 2005 18:06:34 GMT -5
Post by mai on Dec 20, 2005 18:06:34 GMT -5
how depressing.
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Dec 22, 2005 23:34:01 GMT -5
Post by fireflame on Dec 22, 2005 23:34:01 GMT -5
i know and i cant even help her because of her mom
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Jan 3, 2006 19:13:23 GMT -5
Post by mai on Jan 3, 2006 19:13:23 GMT -5
Another one.
Missing You
The rain taps softly on the glass Outside the storm is raging There’s hours before the storm will pass ‘Till then, I’ll sit here gazing.
The storm shows how I’m feeling Mixed up and all confused And you will find me kneeling Crying from feeling used.
How long will this torment last Not of body but of mind? My understanding left too fast And joy too hard to find.
Now it seems so long ago And faraway to me Those times before, that I’ve let go, When I was safe and free.
When you were here and next to me I felt safe and then protected. But now I see it could not be, I stand here undetected.
The world quickly passes by And cruelly mocks my grief. All I can do is sit and cry With no hope of relief.
Where are you now that I’m in need Of a friend to sit and talk to? Gone from me, yet I proceed To look helplessly for you.
I dream back to the old days When we were close and friends But those are before parted ways And back before the end.
I thought that you would be here Forever and for always To lean against in times of fear, But I see we’ve parted ways.
You were always there for me No matter what they say. Now I would cross the deepest sea To feel safe with you today.
I am locked in this prison That the world has put me in And quietly I watch the sun Set and rise again.
As that sun sets every night I lose my hope yet again. I dream of taking flight To find in you my friend.
I would break free to go and find The hope I found in you And in so doing I could find That protection strong and true.
And yet as I watch that sun set I know that it will not be For I only find what I can get And that’s not you, I see.
I wish to fly and to be free Make the tears please cease. So a shadow will I be Until I find that peace.
The rain taps softly on the glass Outside the storm is raging There’s hours before the storm will pass ‘Till then, I’ll sit here gazing.
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Jan 5, 2006 9:43:32 GMT -5
Post by Ed on Jan 5, 2006 9:43:32 GMT -5
Wow. Thats deep. It is truly amazing what people can do. I wrote a poem... but it's a struggle I have not completed. Sorry. Maybe later I shall post the poem I wrote. Right now is not the time.
Those where amazing. Really. Great job, Mai. sorry about your friend, Keri. Or Uo. *Scampers off to the Ranting Thread*
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Jan 5, 2006 19:13:39 GMT -5
Post by mai on Jan 5, 2006 19:13:39 GMT -5
Thanks, foureyedjack.
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Jan 5, 2006 21:28:54 GMT -5
Post by yokohoshi on Jan 5, 2006 21:28:54 GMT -5
This is not a poem, but it is what I was thinking about today during school. I have acctually written a few poems, but I won't bore you with them. (Oh, by the way I think up something new every day during school. Don't ask me why.)
I know it hurts. just close your eyes and look up. feel the rain mingle with the tears on your cheeks. let it go. breathe. this pain will soon wash away.
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Jan 5, 2006 22:12:39 GMT -5
Post by mai on Jan 5, 2006 22:12:39 GMT -5
i love that! well, it's kinda depressing, but i have felt like that before.
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Jan 6, 2006 18:20:18 GMT -5
Post by yokohoshi on Jan 6, 2006 18:20:18 GMT -5
He. Thanx.
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Jan 9, 2006 18:32:00 GMT -5
Post by fireflame on Jan 9, 2006 18:32:00 GMT -5
wow i wish i can put some on my feelings on a peice of paper and make it a poem but i am not that good at writting
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Jan 10, 2006 18:47:23 GMT -5
Post by yokohoshi on Jan 10, 2006 18:47:23 GMT -5
but i am not that good at writting writting...he he...Oh I could say something really mean right now, but I will resist for Fireflames sake(besides she isn't as bad as she might think). Ok so here is one of the poems I wasn't going to trouble you with. This is acctually running through the judging of the second stage of reflections now so tell me what you think! Rain Clouds are in the skies; The sun is gone away. Rain runs down my window. The light is gone today.
I watch the rain run dow the glass; I feel it on my cheeks. I wonder why I couldn't let it go before, I've felt this pain for weeks.
I watch the heavens cry; I feel my own tears fall. I see the world get dripping wet. I hear my sorrows call.
I wounder why the rain releases all my pain; It sets free all emotion, my sorrows and my fears. What is this power the rain holds, To set a flow my tears?
I don't know where the power comes from, Or how it came to be. I don't know if it heals other hearts, But I know it heals me.
So when inside I'm dying, And my pain won't go away, I close my eyes and hope That it will rain today.
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Jan 11, 2006 18:35:08 GMT -5
Post by fireflame on Jan 11, 2006 18:35:08 GMT -5
i love it and i think i should thank you on ur reply but i am not sure
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Jan 11, 2006 23:57:39 GMT -5
Post by yokohoshi on Jan 11, 2006 23:57:39 GMT -5
Well thank you. You needn't thank me really. At least...I don't think you need to...
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Jan 13, 2006 0:04:09 GMT -5
Post by fireflame on Jan 13, 2006 0:04:09 GMT -5
i know it is confuseing is it u dont know if u sould thank someone
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